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Question: Please read my short poem i wrote about heroin addiction, give feedback?
(Posted by: AJ on 2009-02-10 16:18:40)
As the black tar surpasses my vein These feelings decline, the anger and pain I enter a world, so sane and so pure No longer feel alone, but loved and secure I lie in my bed, I can't stay awake But I feel so alive, how much more can I take? Another dose will make me alright It'll make me forget, and have peace through the night But I wake up before dawn, shivering cold I look for the needle, but that answer is old Besides, I used it all up the night before last So what kind of smack brings me back to the past? Is there such thing? Where can I buy it? You tell me there's help, I no longer deny it The next morning I arive, dropped off in a car Sad that the methadone don't taste as good as the tar And I sit in the clinic, so scared and unsure Free me from this; I just want to be pure i should have put this in the poetry section. |
